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As I watched my image in the mirror, I understood the
seriousness of my situation. My friends and family all made it seem like I was
normal, but I only realized my predicament as I looked at myself or what I
thought was me.
“Nkem” she shouted. “What on earth are you doing here all
alone? C’mon.” She said pulling me away from my dressing mirror.
“No” I protested. “Just look at me, I am gradually fading
away”.
Unsuccessfully, Chibu
tried to hide the pain behind her eyes. I saw that she was struggling so hard
to fight back the tears. She turned away sharply, but only too late. Her tears
betrayed her.
I turned back to my dressing mirror, stroking my hair, some
amount of hair came off as I stroked.
Reality struck me. I was going to die! I
was going to leave my family and my best friend behind. I burst into a fresh
round of tears, my fierce sobs violently shaking my already frail body.
Chibu rushed to my side as she had always done whenever I
needed her. She was the sister I never had. We had known each other for twelve
years; though it seemed like we had known each other all our lives. People
never understood our friendship for we were different in every way possible. We
had different physical attributes: standing at 5ft 11inches, I outsized her
petite 5ft 4 inches frame. We also had different complexions; her milky skin
looked almost white compared to my ebony skin. In fact, the only thing we had
in common was the street where we lived, Taiwo Ade Street. My family moved in three
months before hers and from the moment we saw each other, we became inseparable.
As I wept my heart out, she wept with me, hugging me close.
“Why? Why?” I kept asking. “I am only sixteen. I don’t want to die.”
“Don’t talk like that Nkem, you are not going to die.”
“But I will.” I screamed. “I am suffering from a terminal
disease! Oh God! I don’t want to die.”
It seemed like hours we were together, tightly clasped in
each other’s arms, not wanting to let go.
All of a sudden, my head began to spin, I felt myself gradually
losing consciousness.
“Chibu” I whispered barely able to talk. “Call mummy.”
With alarm written all over her face, she ran towards the
stairs, screaming along the way. It was almost midnight when I regained
consciousness. My surroundings seemed unfamiliar. The bed was hard and
uncomfortable; my throbbing head didn’t help matters either. It took me about
two minutes to realize that I was on a hospital bed. Chibu was by my right
holding my hand. She was asleep. My mother was also asleep on the couch
adjacent to my bed. I felt so sorry for my poor mother. Since my diagnosis nine
months ago, she had become a shadow of herself. She had lost her usual charm
and cheer.
I was tired of putting everyone through pain. I guessed it
was time to give up. I had suffered so much, going through endless series of
tests, surgeries and medication. My parents had spent so much on my treatments,
though this was nothing compared to the emotional trauma they were passing
through. It was hopeless. I was suffering from a malignant brain tumour. My
death was inevitable. All hope was lost when two weeks earlier, I stopped
responding to treatment. My condition had deteriorated dramatically since the
past week
“Chibu.” I called. She woke up in a start.
“Nkem” She gasped. “Are you okay?”
“I will be soon.” I replied.
“What do you mean?” She asked, sitting up. “Are you feeling
better?” Relief showing slightly on her face.
“No, but I will be soon.”
“What exactly are you talking about?”
“I am going to die Chibu.”
“No you are not! Don’t talk like that.”
I sensed the fear in her voice and held her hand tighter.
“Promise me ...”I lost my breath.
“Nkem” she screamed. “Don’t leave me" she begged.
“I have to go, I am in such pain. But promise me you’ll
never forget me.”
Hot tears of sorrow flowed down her eyes as she stared
wide-eyed at me.
“I can never forget you. You are my best friend.”
I smiled and said, “Tell my mummy that I love her. Tell her
I will miss her badly.” I held back the tears threatening to escape. With a
weakened breath I barely managed to continue, “Tell her not to feel so bad. My
sufferings and hers will be over.”
“No” she protested hugging me tightly as though that would
prevent the eager hands of death from taking me away. “You can’t leave me, what
will I do without you? Don’t go!” She screamed.
It was too late. I had taken my last breath.
Written by Chidimma(Chiddles).
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